- Check up this new graphic / photography firm. Tell me what you think about the site.
- Posted by Dan on November 3rd, 2003
Check up this new graphic / photography firm. Tell me what you think about
the site.
http://www.jamestowngroup.com
- Posted by Charles on November 3rd, 2003
Mmmmh.... Black bgnd + green text looks like hackers' website (cracks.am,
astalavista.box.sk...)
Text should be clearer, bolder,...
Should look more professional overall...
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- Posted by Matt Bostock on November 3rd, 2003
Looks personal and friendly (colourful), but too dark and a little
unprofessional. Excessive use of images.
Matt
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- Posted by Matt Bostock on November 3rd, 2003
I didn't mention it's all scrunched on one side of the screen :-D
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- Posted by Patrick on November 3rd, 2003
The overall idea has promise and some of the portfolio and photography
pieces are well done. I think black backgrounds can work well if done
properly. However. . .
There are three ways to navigate the site. The cross hair/registration
mark, the nav-bar at the top, and the photo-rollovers on the left.
This seems a little redundant and indecisive. If one method of
navigation works then why include 2 more. I think it makes the
navigation a little confusing.
Secondly, why would there be different icons/photos for the same
categories (a exacto blade and a pencil for graphic design) this adds
to the confusion and inconsistency.
Take out as much as you can while leaving the necessary information to
allow the user to successfully navigate the site with ease.
As a personal opinion I would loose the cross hair, also where is the
company logo? Surly it cant be the type treatment in the upper left?
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- Posted by JP Kabala on November 3rd, 2003
Fix the grammar mistakes. Several plural nouns with singular verbs and vice
versa.
Makes the client look dumb, not someone I'd trust with setting type.
- Posted by murmur on November 4th, 2003
Dan wrote:
not bad. but i can't read the blue hyperlinks against the black
background at all. (and I have good eyesight!) also, the main image
link to http://www.gameco.com/ on
http://www.jamestowngroup.com/main/webgameco.html is misspelled, leading
to page not found.
the flourescent green on black is a little video-game-ish to me. maybe
consider lightening the black to a charcoal gray, and soften the text
color a bit?
(using nn7.1)
- Posted by Matt Bostock on November 4th, 2003
One more thing: their web designer has either a print background or has been
quite traditionally educated in design, I'm guessing.
Matt
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