Maybe someone out there has some feedback about a design I am working on...


www.fxdesigns.net/rawchoice/

Thanks and enjoy

AK

"akjijioeh" <akjijioeh@nc.rr.com> wrote in message
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Very nice looking...

....the Flash intro is a bit restrictive because of the one little link to
the main site. Perhapsthat could be expanded without effecting aesthetics
too much.

You'll probably get alot of negative feedback for the flash intro.

The main site is nice too.

G

"akjijioeh" <akjijioeh@nc.rr.com> wrote:

It's lovely ... but not functional. Too bad.

If you cleaned it up, made the text legible, that would be a cool front
page. It's too bad that the text moves around and is so faint.

I'd like to know what design school is teaching all these kids to hide
text. It's either 2points in size or 10% opacity or the text moves off the
screen before it can be read ... who's teaching them these odd habits?

--
Farlo, the Urban Fey Dragon

Farlo,
Thanks for the tips.

I didn't go to any design school.... but I can see what you are talking
about.

I just didn't want the text to overwhelm the awesome imagery. but as you
know, its just a couple clicks and the I can incorporate what ur talking
about. so its not toooo bad....

thanks for the feedback... what design school did you go to?
ak

"Farlo" <hall.j.m@att.net> wrote in message
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"akjijioeh" <akjijioeh@nc.rr.com> wrote:

I just read =)
Some classes, mostly informal, some OJT

Legibility and functionality are big draws for me. Without those two, a
web site might as well be a big picture.

I draw, too ... and was playing around with Photoshop a bit, today.

Seeing text that cannot be read brings back ugly memories of time wasted
in Visual Arts classes back at school in the 90's.

--
Farlo, the Urban Fey Dragon