Mostly copy criticisms, Michel, except the first one:
-- The opening portfolio piece is weak. 3,6,10 or 16 would be better
openers.
-- "I don't have any overhead;"
This is good conversationally, but it doesn't fly literally.
-- "Better service than an agency, at a fraction of the price."
Which agency? For what clients? This is an "off on the wrong foot"
statement.
-- "they pass through so many hands that it rarely gets done properly the
first time."
I would revise that whole section so that it sells *you* rather than tearing
down large agencies. Sounds like sour grapes. There are, after all, many
accounts that absolutely need the resources a large agency provides.
-- "Professional quality. Unlike some designers, I am not trying..." Again,
sell yourself. Leave other designers out of it. Not professional.
So what is the purpose of the site? This reminds me of a Steven Wright bit:
"I drive down to my local convenience store at four in the morning. They
have a big sign that says 'Open 24 Hours!' I see the clerk locking the door.
"Hey! The sign says you're open 24 hours!" He says, "That's right.....but
not in a row."
Dan
http://www.FreelanceWorkshops.com
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