- New Design... needing some feedback please
- Posted by akjijioeh on December 19th, 2003
Maybe someone out there has some feedback about a design I am working on...
www.fxdesigns.net/rawchoice/
Thanks and enjoy
AK
- Posted by woodsie on December 19th, 2003
In article <qpzEb.174969$I53.6873457@twister.southeast.rr.com >,
"akjijioeh" <akjijioeh@nc.rr.com> wrote:
227k splash page is a waste
too much kerning in the title/logo
rollovers too big
layout a bit boring....(doesn't say 'raw' to me)
too many pics of fruit/vegies (ie. distracts the eye)
- Posted by Re Re on December 19th, 2003
Nice picture.
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- Posted by cpg on December 19th, 2003
Beautiful imagery, very nice photography, but not a web friendly
presentation. Navigation is unclear and the big mouseovers are too
abrupt and well, too big. It's as though you couldn't pick a favorite
splash pages so you make the user choose 1 of 4. I also don't like the
font for "therawchoice.com" . Seperating the words somehow will help
too -- I read it as "theraw choice". Maybe TheRawChoice.com. Or use
slightly different colors for different words or first letters of
words.
The inside page is too different form the home page. The home page
looks great -- I would carry that theme throughout.
There are a lot of things that I really like, including the overall
feel and impact of the look. I love the cozy, warm feeling of the
photos and the earthy tones. Tighten up the technical/web useability
end of things and you'll have a winner.
cpg
- Posted by akjijioeh on December 19th, 2003
Wow, thanks everyone for the great feedback. I'm new to this group but i
think posting here its really going to help my design out.
Thanks again!
Happy Holidays to everyone!
AK
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- Posted by Al Lorio Design on December 19th, 2003
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akjooooooo! gazuntite (:
yeah, there's some good designers in here who will give you some valuable
constructive critisism.
....and the occasional political extremist rant is quite entertaining! (:
- Posted by Innovative on December 20th, 2003
like the pics don't like the fonts
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- Posted by akjijioeh on December 20th, 2003
well what font would you recommend?
thanks for the feedback
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