I'm not very happy with these new logos *IMHO the page n° 2 is better* but
anyway if you could give me some comments I will be very glad.

http://www.nveventi.it/nucleus_logo/nucleuslogo4.htm

I will make a break for this project to find different kind of ideas and
inspiration......

Thanks a lot in advance.
--
Davide Montellanico

David:
Looks like you're stuck going in circles with this one, and it seems as
if your computer's the one spinning you around. You've got one or two
concepts, none of them truly strong, and a bunch of iterations of said
concepts, none of them exectuted very well...

I've got an idea for you: next time, show us a round or two of logo
*concepts*, have them be scanned sheets of paper with only pencil
sketches on them (many, many sketches, done quickly and fleshed out only
enough to consider an *idea*). Do a few pages, scan them all in, and
then point out a few concepts you think might be the strongest. We'll
let you know what we think, and then you're free to flesh out one or two
of the strongest concepts in Illustrator (or your logo-makin' app of
choice).

I guarantee you'll be on firmer ground than if you simply keep shifting
around red circles and questionable typefaces and posting the results
every few days. Best of luck with things...

My 2 cents...

Ben W.

Davide Montellanico wrote:

Davide, hear this man; he knows what he's talking about...

Well... I'd call it the "Cold Turkey" method.... OUCH!

Anyway, it's know for being painful, but it'll work wonders when you're
stuck in a rut...

I still like the one logo I've mentioned before... I'd presented that one
and moved on... but of course, I'm a cold, heartless and greedy mercenary
bastard, and *not* a designer...

To each its own , I guess...

:-)

Pepe
Milano, Italy

Hi Ben,
I agree totally with you, using traditional instrument like pencil and paper
will enable me to find out better solution in more less time and it is a
more practical way of work, I'm considering to take with me a little
sketchpad and a pencil, go out and work in a park :-)

Anyway the typefaces *I know you don't like it :-)* I developed for the
first page comes out from different sketches I made using simple little
sheets of paper and a pen, after I developed the entirely alphabet using
freehand.

Actually I feel the need to take a break and do some reasearch to feed
creativity. I want to start from the word nucleus and the first next step
will be the dictionary and the latin ethimology book :-)

Thanks again for your suggestions Ben.

--
David(e) Montellanico




"Ben Woodward" <bwoodward@perpetuaREMOVEinteractive.com> ha scritto nel
messaggio news:3F0CC0F7.4030604@perpetuaREMOVEinteractive.co m...

I know .......I know.........sigh :-(

:-)

Cold Turkey ? I dont know the meaning *metodo della Turchia fredda*

Do you like my italian translation? I'm desperate :-)

Yes I can imagine.......but I must try......and first of all I need to
translate it correctly :-(

If you write this kind of phrases I could believe that you are a real
designer in 'incognito' :-)
Probably you have a real designer soul. I'm sure you are a creative guy, if
not why to stay in this NG with all these strange people around? :-)



Ciao Pepe, a quando una buona birra ghiacciata? *for all the buddies here:
I'm asking Pepe to go out for a cold beer*

--
David(e) Montellanico