- Re: Brochure Critique
- Posted by tomas.holm on June 26th, 2003
IMO you have to small margins. When folded, the text will go to close to the
edges. Try another font. You CAN use centered text, if it feels right.
Where you line up the services you do I think its ok with centered text,
just dont have to much space between the characters, it gets hard to read.
You should try to lighten up the background to make the contrast better (IOW
to be able to read the text).
/Tomas
Den 03-06-26 15.40, i artikeln
Xns93A6DC78AC793fettsjettsyahoocom@203.134.67.67, skrev "Simon"
<fettsjettsSPAMMERDIE@yahoo.com>:
- Posted by Simon on June 27th, 2003
Hee, hee,
Thanks for the criticism everyone. I expected to be lambasted on several
points and was not disapointed. I've done a little more work with respect
to some of your comments and re posted the altered images.
Simon
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In order to make an apple pie from scratch, you must first create the
universe.|
-Carl Sagan
- Posted by TooBigForYou on June 27th, 2003
in article Xns93A7480D32DE8fettsjettsyahoocom@203.134.67.67, Simon at
fettsjettsSPAMMERDIE@yahoo.com wrote on 6/26/03 4:04 PM:
Notice you left off the link...
haha.
--
Mike
* Logo Design *
Put some fun in your next logo!
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- Posted by Simon on June 27th, 2003
TooBigForYou <TooBig@IGotItRightHere.com> wrote in
news:BB20FD10.791B3%TooBig@IGotItRightHere.com:
That's because they didn't change
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In order to make an apple pie from scratch, you must first create the
universe.|
-Carl Sagan
- Posted by Stan Wojda on June 27th, 2003
Simon wrote
and concentrate your efforts on the photography.
- Posted by Pete on June 29th, 2003
I haven't seen it because I get a 404 error. But from what I've read
here it sounds like it looks fantastic. Except for the typography,
layout, design, color choice, photography, spelling and grammar.
Everything else looks great!
Pete
http://www.petefolio.com
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