"Robert Wilson" <RWDesigns@nc.rr.com> wrote in message
news:6yuMa.220484$jp.5704374@twister.southeast.rr. com...
I have a couple comments:

1) I would do away with the black line around the text. I think it might
look much more elegant and less constrained without the line.

2) The verbiage. Using words like "hey" and "pretty much" creates an
unprofessional image with your wording. I would rethink how you are
portraying yourself with those words. They are what makes someone want to go
further or not.

3) On the opening page, spread the line height, it feels too cramped.
and,
4) Aside from changing colors (which I won't go in to) I would bring the
navigation box directly below the heading.

I like your heading and logo, they are nice looking. Good job.

Kathy